CONFLICT/ACTION/RESOLUTION
The only way to hold a reader or publisher and to keep the pages turning is to use conflict and resolution every beat of the scene. This means that a character wants something and there is something in the way of their getting their need met.
Conflict is important to define the arc of a story, BUT conflict must be on every page, or at least every page and a half. The way to find conflict is to review each step of action per page and define NEED, WANT, OBSTACLE, ACTION, and define HOW THIS CONFLICT IS RESOLVED. To resolve conflict one force wins and another force looses.
Aristotle defined the concept, giving us 2000 years of writing that works!
Make a list of wants for each character in each scene.
What is their intention/agenda when they enter the scene?
What is their obstacle, what stands in their way?
How is this conflict resolved?
How does this resolution lead into the scene that follows?
Analyze each beat, each moment in your scenes using the chart below. Try this for at least one scene. I challenge you to complete this chart for each scene in an entire chapter. (I make a copy of this chart and insert it with each scene in my manuscript. If there is no answer, you have found an area to work. Send me your results. AnneRandolph@KitchenTableWriting.com
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SCENE: TIME: PLACE:
CHARACTER NEED
WANT
CHARACTER NEED
WANT
OBSTACLE
CONFLICT
ACTION
RESOLUTION
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All rights reserved 2009 Reproduce only with permission from Anne Randolph
www.KitchenTableWriting.com www.AnneRandolph.com info@KitchenTableWriting.com
Conflict is important to define the arc of a story, BUT conflict must be on every page, or at least every page and a half. The way to find conflict is to review each step of action per page and define NEED, WANT, OBSTACLE, ACTION, and define HOW THIS CONFLICT IS RESOLVED. To resolve conflict one force wins and another force looses.
Aristotle defined the concept, giving us 2000 years of writing that works!
EXERCISE TO FIND CONFLICT:
Make a list of wants for each character in each scene.
What is their intention/agenda when they enter the scene?
What is their obstacle, what stands in their way?
How is this conflict resolved?
How does this resolution lead into the scene that follows?
Analyze each beat, each moment in your scenes using the chart below. Try this for at least one scene. I challenge you to complete this chart for each scene in an entire chapter. (I make a copy of this chart and insert it with each scene in my manuscript. If there is no answer, you have found an area to work. Send me your results. AnneRandolph@KitchenTableWriting.com
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SCENE: TIME: PLACE:
CHARACTER NEED
WANT
CHARACTER NEED
WANT
OBSTACLE
CONFLICT
ACTION
RESOLUTION
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All rights reserved 2009 Reproduce only with permission from Anne Randolph
www.KitchenTableWriting.com www.AnneRandolph.com info@KitchenTableWriting.com
Posted by Soup Kitchen Writing at 8/28/2009 1:09 PM 
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Categories: Let's talk about writing
Tags: kitchen table writing memoir prompts fresh writing write your life story start lines Aristotle Resolution writing books Act Two Conflict Act II Action opening lines
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